Summary of Teacher feedback comments

1) Camera / Mise

angle 'shifts' on arrival are affective.
majority of mid and long shots - but youv'e planned performance with close up.

2) editing

effective dissolves to introduce the characters on the morning after the night before.
the edit that introduces the flasback is a great idea - but the 'post' image needs to appear quicker to be in time with the music.
'cut into' lines more - you don't need to just cut at the end of the line.

3) Genre

party concept is entirely appropriate for expectation of the genre

4) Missing

performance - with close ups of the performers. more shots of instruments
parallel edits to performance to cut into shots (green lit section to long at the moment)