Summary Of Peer Feedback Comments

1) Quality of footage - camerawork, mise-en-scene etc.

really good, nice angles and framing.
high angle shot from stairs gives a really good point of view shot

mise-en-scene is good - bottles, lots of people.
good camera shots - loved the begining - close up of the four faces - liked asleep in field

good camerawork and mise-en-scene really effective with the song and gives a good idea of whats going on.

great use of lighting against the wall and the pan with the red light, good atmosphere and good sense of story with the zooming.

2) use of transitions : editing types : order

use of speed up of footage was effective also the bit with the camera linked how the narrative, worked well backwards from first couple of shots

really liked the transition from image off the camera at the begining

all different speeds were great - liked the coloured gels with dancing.

3) evidence of conventions. which ones? which genre?

costumes and props was appropriate for target audience (teenagers)
spiderman cosgtume - good for genre - funny

4) what is missing? what could be added? changed?

obviousy there is space to fill, but what group has done so far is awsome. could try adding some filters to your footage to make shots evan more interesting.

just needs more footage edited in - but sure your not finished yet.