Pitch Feedback

The overall feedback of our pitch was to ensure that we were consistent with our ideas and the theme of our video remained clear to avoid it just looking like a person walking round a house. The emphasis needs to be focused on the surreal aspect of the idea as this will not only aid the narrative of the video but also fits with the indie feel of the music. On the whole the feedback was positive allowing us to set targets for ourselves and ensuring our work is consistent. We were also advised to look at influential television programmes such as Skins and Shameless showing scenes that may be similar to those we want for the party. We could also look at The Simpsons or Friends relating to our emphasis on the sofa at the beginning.