Wednesday, 2 December 2009

Peer ancillary task feedback

-The inside of the digibox is simple yet effective.
-The Front cover does not give too much away, but clever use of screen grabs means it does not confuse, and the style is conveyed even with the contrasting packaging and music video.
-I like the old leather style of the background
- The back cover could be laid out better, maybe having it more 'central'
-Digibox does look like a real product, I especially like the logo you created


-Magazine advert not very clear, writing hard to read at bottom
-The background has nothing to do with the video
-Do not think it looks like a real product, the basics are there but the background makes the font unreadable, especially with how tiny some of the quotes are. I recommend making all of them the same size at the top, and changing the background image, maybe using a darker image and then making the quotes white would be more effective.

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